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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 1:54:00 PM

    Good one! It didn't occur to me at first to just walk the rest of the way - i'm a little slow sometimes, lol! best wishes in the contest! and thanks for your recent comments on my work. I'm having some health issues so I haven't been on very much, but i do appreciate them and will eventually get back to you :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:47:00 AM

    Great Grook..Enjoyed reading this morn..I have never been there or on a stopped elevator either..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:47:00 PM

    Wanted to see what 'Grook' meant. Interesting!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:53:00 PM

    why me . I like the title you chose for it. That's immediately what pops into one's mind!!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:52:00 PM

    Craig, halfway down, halfway up, keep the glass half-full. I couldn't resist with my first comment. So, looking at the comments below, I over-thunked this gruk?

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:50:00 PM

    wow...hope you got out. and solution did not get out of hand.... soup mail....pd

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:08:00 PM

    I got it! Part of your job is escalator maintenance and you were almost on your way home. Worthy grook.

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 3/1/2013 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your name is Reason for a reason!
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Being simple minded Im taking this at face value..just walk down! enjoyed. BG

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 3/1/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You got it!!
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:07:00 AM

    So you got stuck halfway down to hell, eh? Hyuk-hyuk! Sly enough to beat the devil at his own game. I suppose getting stuck halfway there, is better than actually being in hell. If the double-meaning of this gruk is about something else, then I might be too simple to grasp its vastness and deeper meaning. Hey, you made me think a bit, which is usually a good thing.

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 3/1/2013 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I THOUGHT--HALFWAY UP BUT---HUGS CDA
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:33:00 AM

    :) Hmmmmm....what did you do? Deeper meaning here? A Grook? Never heard of this form of poetry. Thanks for sharing...

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/1/2013 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, Craig...I got that this is the Grook format! I just had never heard of it before! Read up a bit more on it! Interesting. You've done it well!