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Senryu

Senryu 

As sun pales 
The old town looks haggard 
Till dawn 


Senryu 
Streetlamps sadly knows
They only play stand-in roles   
The sun is the star. 

Senryu 
When sun takes a break 
Crossly hides behind a cloud 
The day is murky 

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Don't even bring up judges (yes I know you didn't). I am soured on them.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:22:00 AM

    I love those words streelamps "they only play stand-in roles". Save them and use them again some place. I'll be waiting. love, Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 3/1/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Katy, i once danced under a streetlight it was my limelight and I was arrested