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Life

Sitting here thinking,
afraid of blinking.
If I let go 
that will be me awol.

I never used to be like this,
consumed of bliss.
Yet time doesn't stop,
even if you hit a rock.

Surrounded by nothing but support,
yet constantly being brought down by thwart.
I lie in my bath: keeping my head underwater for that little bit too long,
in the hope my life would skip to its next song.

I haven't given up,
yet my bombs close to being erupt. 
I don't know what to do 
or where to turn to.


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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:24:00 AM

    you have the answer, right there, in your mind that, which drives your pen, that which creates wonderful, poetry, Come on Kiwi girl,, this is lovely poetry, you have a gift, share it with us and with the world,, here on soup....Harry

    Purdon Avatar Christina Purdon Date: 3/2/2013 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Harry :)