The Chorus of Dawn- Haiku Medley by Eileen Ghali

The Chorus of Dawn- Haiku Medley

World hushed in silence Birds unable to keep still… The chorus of dawn Melody of praise Chases the shroud of the night… Blessed hues of morn Dawn gives way to day The celebration of life… Is well under way Eileen Manassian Ghali

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 PM

This is very beautiful... The first and second were stunning...-R

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/1/2013 12:12:00 PM

Eileen a beautiful painted melody with your Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

kash poet

Date: 3/1/2013 8:56:00 AM

very nice imagery!Love this.Read my poem YOUR SINGLE GLANCE when u get time.

Eileen Ghali Date: 3/1/2013 9:56:00 AM

Thanks! Will check it out right now! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/1/2013 6:16:00 AM

This is the form that I struggle with but you seem to have the hang of it.

Eileen Ghali Date: 3/1/2013 8:05:00 AM

Richard, I don't know if I have it down pat. I had some discussions with two Poetry Soupers about this form. Seems that there is more to it than this...I try to get the breakoff after the second line where the BAM is supposed to come it. I hope I've managed. I do stick to th 5-7-5 syllable rule so...yea...glad you liked it!

Guru Jad

Date: 3/1/2013 6:13:00 AM

I never understood Haikus... They are so Japanese!!! Ha-ha.. But you have made this venture into my heart and my brain!!! You are so talented, my dear!! Queen Eileen.... this is a masterpiece!

Eileen Ghali Date: 3/1/2013 8:07:00 AM

Guru dear...thank you so much for your sweet post. I do love hearing from you and SEEING you! HA HA! Thanks for the visit in my office the other day! Well, I really wasn't much into haikus...and not because they are Japanese...HAHA! No...but I like them because you can say so much in so little and feel satisfied! Hugs!

harry horsman

Date: 3/1/2013 6:08:00 AM

Oh i am so glad, to be the first here to witness this wonderful poetry, the early bird gets the worms, so they say..love this beauty

Eileen Ghali Date: 3/1/2013 8:09:00 AM

Glad your tum tum is full of yummy cheese, though I don't try to write cheesy stuff! HA HA! ;)

Eileen Ghali Date: 3/1/2013 8:08:00 AM

Harry...my pleasure to have you as the first to read this! :) How have you been, my dear! I always love hearing from you! Glad you liked it! Take care!

Guru Jad Date: 3/1/2013 6:14:00 AM

....... but the second mouse eats the cheese :D... so the proverb continues hahaha...

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