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Space

Our minds heavy
with worry,
make us more anxious
and uncertain about life

We become older
than we look,
and more exhausted
than we ought to be

If we let go of worry,
our minds become empty,
creating a void that makes
our minds lighter,
making us to float to any
kind of possibilities

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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:44:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Teddy xx

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/11/2013 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy, thanks for voting for me! ;)
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:52:00 AM

    Teddy, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/11/2013 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks great Poet. I really appreciate it! ;)