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Small Space

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Below is the poem entitled Small Space which was written by poet Debra Squyres. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Small Space

 
Small Space Space is tight in the small garden Planted on the small terrace Along the side careless Climbing beans Easily grow Space is limited in sections small Plants in pots along the rail Alternating seating well Carrots seeded Earthen stow Space is reduced for entertaining Partial am I to fresh produce Alterations seem obtuse Cuisine freshness Efforts show
Written for Members Contest : Space on 2/27/13

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 5:29:00 PM
    What an excellent Shape poem, Debra!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:22:00 PM
    Very nice. :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Lots of crunch in this Debra; maybe you love veggies as much as I do. I think it's a great entry for the contest and wish you much luck! Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Excellent write!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:10:00 AM
    Debra a good take on the theme, good luck...David

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:49:00 PM
    hmmm, no congrats here. What? Let me go check the list and see if you got on!! (sorry if you didn't because I really liked it)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Love your poem Debra, stopping by real quick, I like the way the title to your poem drew me in.. he he he,,,i like the space you gave a chefs garden bed... :-) well I better head off and post my any poem goes contest winners.. thank you for the nice comment,,, always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 1:35:00 PM
    This is really wonderful, Debra! I love the poem itself, but the format is also really cool. Well done! :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Love this one. We had a patio in a town house. Tried to grow veggies, but only made a lair for a bird catching cat. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:42:00 AM
    love this clever one - a sure winner - congrats on alll your wins : )

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:06:00 AM
    Love how you organized this..as if ...to fit in your precious need for space...Awesome... and so original!!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:39:00 PM
    I like how you explore physical space in your poem and it is also accentuated by the actual physical shape of the words themselves.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:47:00 PM
    Both visually and emotionally pleasing.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Reads like a winner and a great salad and gourmet meals..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Yeah....very cool

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 3:23:00 PM
    Nice garden, it sounds like you live in Chicago or New York. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Abundance from careful attention to the little things. Enjoyed the trip through your garden.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:45:00 AM
    What a lovely use of space and a nice tower of pots with your arrangement of words; plenty of room to plant more love it xx

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:41:00 PM
    I want to spend time in that space you just described. I think of beautiful, quiet space. Very nice.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:06:00 PM
    wow, I love the way this looks when formatted. It's so cool and a very unique way to do the Space contest. Love it.

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