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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Im glad he got to see the sun and not listen to that inner voice which wanted yo destroy him.Very clever thoughts penned Caleb.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:06:00 PM
    CALEB, :-) CONGRATULATIONS in Anne's "Battling Addiction" contest.. I think very highly of Miss Anne, take care~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Caleb, I feel bad because I noticed that I made some mistakes when I finalized my contest- next time I will make sure to keep it 35 entries instead of 45- too overwhelming! Lol. Anyways, this was an extremely unique entry for my contest and it should have received glory, not just an HM- just for the record. ;) VERY well done. Thank you for participating!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your HM Caleb xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:36:00 AM
    I can't believe I missed this one of yours! This is so clever and very unique. Your poems always make the reader THINK - Please continue to spin these intricate poems! Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Your poem was outstanding Caleb. A winner in my books :-)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:14:00 AM
    Addiction comes in many forms, and the excellent way you have portrayed it in this poem covers all, without mentioning what. You have talent !

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:09:00 PM
    Wow. I like this... made me think.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:40:00 AM
    this is an excellent Poem Caleb truly excellent the flow is wonderful and the wording just exceptional...Glad the donkey's okay x

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:40:00 PM
    really good poem drugs or any addiction can make you two different persons

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:18:00 PM
    wow, this is very profound, Caleb. You are one smart cookie and this is a fantastic poem!!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Wonderful wonderful wonderful winner!!!!!!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Hi Caleb, wow... almost like a split person fighting his own demons. the imagery of the man facing freedom against the sun, was deep and gripping.... a well performed poem. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Caleb cool twist in this one....David