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Laying Into Sensation

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Laying Into Sensation

Laying into sensation, 
not thinking,
feeling, just feel. 
We share touching 
each others damp spots, 
weave in moist hair, 
open passages into darkness, 
release fragrances deep from the earth; 
your fingers move
my fingers, 
then push,
now it’s done 
and there’s nowhere to go 
except inside. 

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:09:00 AM

    WOW!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/1/2013 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... I needed that! J