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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:33:00 AM

    Wow Joann, I love this!! It's a stunning word picture! And I think it does show some conflict!! Clear skies in conflict with the clouds which come to cover the beauty... sure it does! I'd give you an A+ myself! :) At any rate, this is going into my favorites.

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti Date: 3/1/2013 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    all the others wrote about violence and I just did not feel violent. Thanks for your comments.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:07:00 AM

    Joanne excellent and beautiful...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:59:00 AM

    so beautiful

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:32:00 AM

    This is so beautiful Joann, such a delightful poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this morning! What an enlightening poem, quite the remarkable write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:06:00 AM

    written as a class assignment to show conflict, which I guess I missed. But I s.till like the poem