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fall the pain

~*~ the chest . . . aged, beautifully engraved and carved it resides in a corridor of my mind, locked my life story the journey, each chapter echoes of tears, melancholy memories of regrets and grieve and within this old chest I place them all the remorse, the despair, gloom and weeping emotions I open the lid and let them go, fall the pain . . . ~*~ February 26, 2013 Sublime Form (Created by Constance) 2 Stanzas, 6 lines each 2/10/12/4/6/8 8/6/4/12/10/2, Syllable Count One continuous thought

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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:29:00 AM

    hi Constance,rereading this beautiful poem....enjoyed again.

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 8:11:00 PM

    It is beautiful, irradiating free verse. Bravo!

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Ripple effect... Always increasing Constance

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 8:34:00 AM

    What a creative new form, and of course your words always stir the heart with deep emotion. As always, beautifully written. :)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:48:00 PM

    I like this a lot. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:46:00 PM

    I like this a lot. The first poem I have read on this site with some depth. You truly have the mind and soul of a poet!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:17:00 AM

    enjoying these awesome words again, my friend. hope you and the kitties are well and warm. Mum just loves the canary!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:08:00 PM

    this is wonderful Constance, truly beautiful, and yes i can so much relate to this...

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:00:00 AM

    This is very good. sometimes we have to let the pain go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:30:00 AM

    "fall, the pain." what gripping emotions in this one, Constance. I can easily relate to all of it. Now...if I can just figure out how to let go of the physical pain and discomfort too. Loved it! I do hope you will write for my free verse, Constance, I really love your work. love and hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:11:00 AM

    to FAVS!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:10:00 AM

    This is really SUBLIME!!I come here for this calmness.Thanks for reading my poem.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:11:00 AM

    Wow this sure hits how we hold things inside and grieve within our chests. Well said with this write. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Wow! An incredible write. I am impressed. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka Garden's Glamour, CDH. I feel flattered. Love -Mohammad

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Lovely, Constance. Very deep and full of meaning..AND you have created a new form? WOW! Hats off to you. :) Thanks for your comments on my poem. I appreciate it! :)

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:13:00 PM

    just love this clever write, Constance. Hope you and the kitties are keeping warm x

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Stunning, elegant and absolutely beautiful...just like you are - Tim

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:32:00 PM

    Beautifully done and so good to let go but still store in a safe place.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:38:00 AM

    This is sad yet beautiful Constance, you know I think we all have a chest of some description be it metaphorical or real yes we should let the pain fall luv xx

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:29:00 PM

    This is sad. we all have things that we store away.That no one else must know, it's good to let them go. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Interesting Constance, hard to be cheery on a dreary day! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:37:00 PM

    great write Constance....from time to time we must open the lid and let pain go...thanks for stopping by

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:19:00 PM

    you know, this poem itself is so sublime, it really fits the form named sublime. I'm happy to see this one today. one of the prettiest of my day.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:11:00 AM

    Constance my continuous thought is I love your writing ...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Interesting work..If we could only put things that are unpleasant into a chest and let it go..Not so easily done..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:22:00 AM

    Nice write about a piece of antique furniture.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:00:00 AM

    Good write..I just lost my momma in jan of this year..thank you for being out here.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:18:00 AM

    This is an interesting form, I enjoy new forms to try, so this one I'll have to try, the Sublime form, hmmmm! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning, what an outstanding piece! You can surely write some amazing pieces, and this one is definitely one of those amazing poems my friend! Great Work!!