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Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

My brain and heart battling 
Spinning can’t find my footing 
My world is dying 
Was this my doing?
On my face I am smiling
In my heart I am crying 
Took something that was beautiful and destroyed it

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:30:00 PM
    I felt every word here..and I agree with your repsonse..that pain is a good thing, it reminds us that we are living. :)

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    Date: 3/1/2013 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Pace for commenting.
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Sorry for the loss. Enjoyed the poem. daver

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:08:00 AM
    Abigale...I feel every nuance of pain this poem portrays...Don't be so hard on yourself...we live and learn and keep moving forward. This is an very great write. Thanks for sharing. Also, thanks for your visit on my poem. I appreciate it.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:48:00 AM
    - The feeling is painful, Abigale ! - Well written ! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:21:00 PM
    Nice, I have a poem called Death Of A Rose that shares the same expression!!! Love your work!!!

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    Date: 2/26/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nate I will read it
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:33:00 PM
    We all go through these moments in our lives. Eventually it will pass and you'll wonder what all the fuss was about. There are exceptions to ever rule of course, but after 77 years, this what I have discovered. Keep 'em coming my dear Abigale... hugs, Jack xox

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    Date: 2/26/2013 7:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jack writing has been the best pain reliver of any alignments of the heart.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Abigale, i know the feeling,, and the hard part is when it can't be restored... they will never know how we get lost in one moment. xox~PD

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    Date: 2/26/2013 8:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Poet Destroyer.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Abigale it can be put right...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:00:00 AM
    Deep soul searching question, the answer is this: Learning the ways of the world and of your heart. A painful process it is indeed, but suffering is the source of wisdom! I think part of the answer to your question you have seeing in my today's poem. You have done nothing wrong! Excellent work! Thank you!!

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    Date: 2/26/2013 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No Thank you my dear Demetrios for your kind words.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:36:00 AM
    A very touchy write here....I wish I could help with the pain.Stay strong and regain your footing. :o)

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    Date: 2/26/2013 3:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dan pain is a good thing. It reminds me I am still living.