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free will

Freedom? Freedom to do what?
To leave, to speak, to act unrestrained,
To protest, to oppose, to shame.
Leave, because if love can't stop you
Nothing will.
Speak, with words that can
Free you from my cell
Act as if you never loved me
Unrestrained as cruel as can be
Feel free to protest
And bring up the past
Oppose my every defense
Until the last
Shame my hopeless endeavour
At the top of your voice
Scream at me "NEVER!"
Your free to go, free to stay
But free you are not to treat me this way.

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Very powerful poem, I really enjoyed it. My name is Jiri Clemons, check out some of my poetry, You might enjoy it.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Powerful words here... strong voice in your words. Very effective for the content. Excellent !!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:09:00 PM

    I see a line drawn in the sand here and so there should be. Emotionally charged and so effective! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Great work about freedom and responsibility and one taking up for themselves..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:33:00 AM

    Situation, this is a well done and deeply profound poem, I so enjoyed reading it today, constance

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:49:00 AM

    A very powerful and expressive poem, it hits the nail on the head and causes pain! Excellent writing, a howling protest! My dear friend, as you know,free we are when free from our passions are! Thank you for your comment. Have a look at my reply!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/26/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    But as you know ONLY GOD knows the truth, only GOD is Wise (Sophos) we are just “friends of wisdom”, Philos tis Sophias: Philosophers, but someone to be a philosopher, Alas, doesn't mean that Sophia considers him a friend of hers! GOD bless you my brother!
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:54:00 AM

    Situation straight to the point...David

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:46:00 AM

    WOW! I loved this! What a powerful write! Yes, stand your ground...no one should get treated in a way that is belittling or demeaning! :) Thanks for your recent comments on my work. I do so appreciate hearing from you!