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Kiss the Rain

Lost and wandering through the desert sands
Each footstep brings a sense of pain
Every time I see a fresh oasis
It's a mirage playing tricks upon my brain

Desolation steeped in loneliness
Is a sensation that I disdain
I drop down on my knees and pray
In a self-loathing refrain

The hope of future pleasantness
Keeps me from going totally insane
I dream of cloud bursts springing forth
In which I kiss the rain

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:48:00 PM

    Lovely-skat

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:13:00 PM

    now this is a perfect example of what should bring someone to kiss the rain!! Well done, Joe. I see a win in your future!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:32:00 AM

    Hope is the greatest gift God gave us on this earth, it is the single drop of dew in a dry of dessert, a droplet of rain on a thirsting soul, well done Joe, I admire you sensitive touch, Bellissimo, xxx

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Joe, a wonderful write and contest entry. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:57:00 AM

    Joe excellent entree for the contest...David