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Raw Onions

raw onions
falling tears
seasoning


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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Oh, brilliant! Just love it!!....xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:20:00 PM

    belated congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:21:00 AM

    Love the flavor onions add to so many dishes. Enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your HM in the contest. Well done !!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:53:00 AM

    congratulations on your fine win! Lori

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 2:04:00 AM

    Congrats on your HM Tahera, I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on a very fine win, Tahera! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:14:00 AM

    Tahera, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 2:20:00 AM

    so true Tahera..congrads on a very wonderful haiku and win.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:31:00 PM

    !!! = shorthand for excellent

    Mannan Avatar Tahera Mannan Date: 2/28/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cutting raw onions brings tears and since they are salty,seasoning.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:12:00 PM

    oh, i really like this one. I adore onions!! and they don't make me cry because I chop them while wearing my contact lenses!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:04:00 AM

    Very nice Tahera!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:40:00 PM

    - lot of rain in Norway ..... it would be many tears .... Well done Haiku, Tahera. -Have a lovely day in the sunshine! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)