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The sand is so soft
Orange light in the distance
A storm is coming

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 4:09:00 PM
    I love Untitled 1, 2 and 3 individually. Each one brings a rich image. When I read them one after another, I imagine sailing across a great sea, seeing the land at long last... and setting foot to a wonderful orange sunset, just before a storm comes in. Such wonderful haiku.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Orange is my favorite color... it must have been a beautiful sight!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Really beautiful haiku :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Nice one, Jeremy. I see you did a few more. Let me go look

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:03:00 AM
    i can see a mandarine sky and feel strong winds blowing..This is my favoutite of your 3 sweet posts

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
    this is so lovely poem.. luv and enjoyed your great write my friend Jeremy ..and appreciate so much your dropping by <3 all the best :) Sk

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:13:00 PM
    ha ha Jeremy, your going posting crazy and I like it...i will read a few more, then log out... s ... super... hope the storm don't come my way... pd

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    Date: 2/27/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, PDA. You make me smile