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Still Life for Clue contest

He jumped on her as she came by
Basket full of chocolate eggs
The wolf spotted him and tried
Catching the rabbit by his legs

Red riding hood kicked the wolf
You’r such a cruel wild animal
Rabbit thought, prayers are answered
Thanking the god of all furry pals

So why am I lying here
With broken eggs all around
Cos red riding hood and I
Ate the chocolates on the ground

Am lying here full of tum
Life seems great have no strife
Posing for a pic for  BBC news
Rabbit: gluttony a still life



25/02/2013

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:31:00 AM

    Love it , I am looking for inspiration and I may have found it xx

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 1:07:00 AM

    Seren now this is really cool, great take on the contest...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/1/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i loved the last line, hoped people got the pun ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:39:00 PM

    This is an incredible and wondrous write my friend! You have enamored me with this clever poem! I loved reading this write this evening! What a fun piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL the picture for the contest looked a bit serious, so I thought I would lighten it.....Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:12:00 PM

    Lol, I was wondering what humor could come from the photo prompt. Nicely done. Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well i tried Connie....Seren