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  1. Date: 4/25/2014 5:08:00 PM
    This piece is heartfelt...David, you are a wonderful poet. Keep it up and I like the repetition.... I wonder If you know that you're a good poet I wonder If you already know it? :) I tried! haha -DWB

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Thanks for sharing this very thoughtful poem my dear friend, David! An awesome write indeed! I extremely enjoyed reading it! More blessings and graces to you! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:55:00 AM
    Life is one big mystery.I wonder if that s the beauty of it or the sad part?Lovely poem transmitting feelings.Wondering is what helps us survive at.times .Re your comment..yep you should rewrite your poem Scott.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 3:48:00 PM
    Well I wonder how great life's journey is going to be if this just popped in your head....loved it..

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:06:00 PM
    I love the approach you took with this piece- the repetition is marvelous! Quite an amazing write, my dear poet friend- and quite well penned! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:52:00 AM
    very romantic revealing the mood and make me also wonder with you..was caught in the mood..thnks for your comment on 'Valentine' david...

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:28:00 PM
    Hello David, it is always nice in receiving words and hi's from you. ATM I'm like you, i haven't had much time on my computer. I try to work things from my phone. but, it is not possible at times.. about your poem: wondering will keep you on your toes. like you said maybe in the future. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:50:00 AM
    David I think you are right, there seems to be a lot to this, ...David