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WithOut You

Without you, I'm here nor there                             
Without you, I just can't survive                                     
Without you, love seems so rare                             
Without you, I find it hard to thrive   

Without you, always being about
Without you, there’s no explanation
Without you, I'm always left in doubt
Without you, I have no destination

Without you, I just feel so unhappy 
Without you, I feel so misplaced
Without you, I've never felt so empty
Without you, I’m lost without a trace

Without you, I want to run and hide
Without you, my heart skips a beat
Without you, I've lost sense of pride
Without you, I now feel so obsolete


WITHOUT YOU- written by myself davidscott  july/august (2011)
THIS IS PART TWO, TO WITH YOU that was written in (2004)
Both are exstensions of other poems I've wrote
Over years worlds apart,  a bad case of nostalgia
someone, I wonder, no one ,one of a kind,sublime
She dont know etc part one and two were originaly
all one poem split into two which felt mirror each other



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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:48:00 AM

    Without the special ones in our lives, things will be very impossible. Great and very lovely poem my dear friend David. I like it! Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:06:00 AM

    This poem is beautifully pennef.It has music in it..I can see it as a song..lovely Scott

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:29:00 PM

    David, this is a very good and heartfelt jump..i like the way you added a second part to your part 2... hope to hear from you next time you r on line... always~ LINDA