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Love Is Rare

I just can't help but always reminisce
Thinking of every moment we'd share                                         
Like when we first met our first kiss

But gone that feeling of walking on air
And something that I will always miss
I used think we were the perfect pair
Thinking of the time's we had, Bliss!

Look here I am again trying to compare
But guess no one else could ever exist
I try to convince myself I no longer care
But the truth is, I'm just that pessimist

As now feels like I'm in some nightmare
If only I could try to see beyond the mist
But finding it hard, as love seems so rare
Though could I give anymore emphasis?






some of this was actually originally apart of love is rare
years ago and became a part of worlds a apart which
I consider a better write some bites I kept and then rewrote
so this like a follow on to dasjavu and love is rare
WRITTEN AT TIME 2002 SOME BITS ALTERED SINSE THEN]
JUST FELT OTHER VERSION BETTER YOU DECIDE,,,,,,,,
 NOTE CHANDED A COUPLE OF LINES 
AGAIN ALTERD AS THOUGHT TO LONG TO MUCH CONENT
THIS VERSION MORE EMPHASIS ON HAT IM SAYING,,,,,,,,,,,,,




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