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Mesmerized

Selling melting stars to taste, their flames; beautiful
Be her flesh perfumed, silhouette, and dim this light
Ruby red lips in luscious; her piercing emerald eyes..
Coffee coloured cream as she these,  silk splendours.

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Reading your poems is like letting chocolate slowly melt in your mouth....they bring a smile and a shiver. Delightful....now I feel like a choccie!!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Rachel; This is a beautiful poem. You have a special style for poetry. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:33:00 PM

    Descriptive lines penned..Thanks for the honor of being placed in your favs..Sara

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:27:00 PM

    Smooth as silk it reads. You inspire with your beautiful words that creates such awesome visuals. You're a breath of fresh air. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Lovely colored thoughts transposed in these beautiful words, Rachel. Love

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:52:00 AM

    Coffee coloured with cream, caramel delight.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:02:00 AM

    Perfect Rachel ...

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:57:00 AM

    I hope to become as skilled as you some day, Miss Rachel. I am incredibly mesmerized by the way you paint such a grand picture with so few words. Your simplicity in quantity is grandeur in quality. Perfection ?

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:36:00 AM

    With stardust in her hands, heart touches heart, flesh touches flesh. Enmeshed in the beauty that God created us for soul purpose, to love and be loved. Have a great day my friend looking forward to the spring and all it's buds here in Toronto, soon the snow will melt, and the sunshine and heat will invigorate my tired bones. Love xxx