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greener pastures

Fleeing into dark night, I run
A truth not wholly accepted
A promise breaking as I write
One story ends, one rejected

I question my decisions now
Fleeing into dark night, I run
Rejection sets me on my way
As to wishes I did have one

The broken mirror reflects all
A dream remaining but no time
Fleeing into dark night,  I run
Only one madness to my rhyme

I run far, always looking back
No hope remains under the sun
Great sentiment jolted off track
Fleeing into dark night, I run

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:37:00 AM

    I can feel the desperation in this... running into the vast unknown hoping it's for the best. The part about great sentiments going out of whack... I feel I can relate to that. What started off as something special and sentimental to you is now slowly losing it's meaning...

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:14:00 AM

    You captured this perfect, but don't look back. I found out it don't help. Many blessings. Muchas bendiciones para ti. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:52:00 PM

    Hello Wayland, hummm should i say stop running... JK... it is good to take all you can... truly i like this dark and madden poem... ... always~ LINDA

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 3/6/2013 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well the darkness it what remains, always. I do not know why, but I don't fight it either. I just let it go and truly it is never forced. Thank you so much for the comment as always, I enjoy your words.
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:30:00 PM

    I like the contrast of green pastures for the title and the lines on fleeing into dark night . very unique!

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 2/27/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your comment.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:34:00 PM

    I am DEFINITELY adding this to my favorites- to say the least! Very awesome write, the use of repetition is very fitting. I enjoyed :) hugs

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:32:00 PM

    You have an enchanting way of writing!! Great poem! Loved it!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 3:56:00 PM

    ha love the poem 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:57:00 PM

    ‡ Wow, That's A Bad Scene Right There. Hope Things Get Better ? If Not Keep Running, LOL˜ Hang In There Big Guy ˜ Love Always, Rachel *