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A Stormy Night

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This form is called a monotetra, invented by Michael Walker.
Each stanza contains 4 lines in monorhyme.
Each line has 8 syllables. The 4th line is 4 syllables repeated.


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A Stormy Night

Lightning blazes across the sky,
Thunder rumbles in quick reply.
Gusty winds cause debris to fly,
While children cry, while children cry.

Torrential rains fall night to day.
Roads are flooded and washed away.
Nature's wrath causing much dismay,
While people pray, while people pray.

A rainbow arcs across the sky,
As stormy clouds go swiftly by.
The sun comes out the earth to dry.
Now comes a sigh, now comes a sigh.

2/24/13
For Rick Parise's contest: A New 8-12 line poem.

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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:08:00 PM
    I don't get line 4, it's more than 4 syllables and it doesn't repeat the first 4 syllables of the poem? HELP L & L

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 9:01:00 PM
    hey it reminds me of some other form i used to know about. The name escapes me now. Anyway, this is a perfect example to show us of the form!!

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:29:00 AM
    This flows so smoothly with wonderful content. I am a fan of your writing.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:18:00 PM
    Astounding poem! I can't think how I missed reading it before now. I like the form you have here, you did a great job with it and it is perfect for the poem.

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:47:00 AM
    fantastic quatrain! I like the refrain; very effective.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 2:58:00 PM
    I love to watch a good storm, just don't like all the damage that they do...Awesome write! Hugs

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:58:00 PM
    Love it !! Fantastic !!! You've caught the feelings of many during a storm so well as well as the relief when it passes. Wonderfully written !!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Great visual and it flowed fluidly. Best wishes on the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Kim, this is wonderful! I love watching thunderstorms - and I felt like I was watching one while reading this gem!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:37:00 PM
    I enjoyed this wonderful write Kim....winning wishes

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:29:00 PM
    Kim, you have penned a wonderful monorhyme, I enjoyed the read. Best to you in the contest, I'm sure this is a winner!~ Caryl

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. I love WATCHING storms! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Hello Kim, this is a very good interpretation of a storm ending with the promise of God to never destroy the world in a flood again. Sometimes the storms we encounter in this day in time are quite intense and can test our fate but in my life God always comes through. Ver good poem Maam, I look forward to reading more.