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Monsoon Mojo

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Monsoon Mojo

Let's go out and frolic in the rain
Shove aside all cares and be vain,
In this stormy night from nothing refrain
Neither cry foul nor complain,
Drench to the core and raise cain,
Clap with the thunder once again
And blaze a trail in the lightning domain,
Drive this sassy storm insane
Within our palms its tears contain -
And then...ha, kiss the rain!

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  1. Date: 10/11/2014 12:36:00 AM
    congrats on your big win! :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2014 12:35:00 AM
    congrats on your big win! :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2014 7:59:00 PM
    Man I love this Mojo you got goin on here Abdul. Tremendous, bravo

  1. Date: 10/10/2014 12:50:00 PM
    I was captured by the title, something I think is often overlooked. You certainly had your mojo going on this one. Congrats. BG

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, you are right. I give more thoughts to the title than the actual poem. The poem flows from the title. I have to have the title first. Thanks for your thoughtful comments.
  1. Date: 10/10/2014 9:07:00 AM
    Congratulations to your No.1 spot Abdul! Your work is really a legendary art in pen! :-)

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. Appreciate much.
  1. Date: 10/10/2014 8:04:00 AM
    - On top of the winner list ... with a beautiful poem, Abdul ! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend:) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 10/10/2014 6:53:00 AM
    I can see how this poem made it to the top of the podium, it is such a beautiful poem. It's going to my favourites. Congratulations on your win.

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am honored! This is my favorite too. Appreciate your generous comments.
  1. Date: 10/10/2014 5:35:00 AM
    Nicely done rhymes, congrats on the win, Abdul

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 10/10/2014 2:20:00 AM
    Love the thought of frolicking in the rain - fabulous write - many congrats:-) hugs jan xxxxx

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jan.
  1. Date: 10/10/2014 2:10:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear poet friend, Abdul. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 10/10/2014 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are being generous. Thank you.
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:11:00 PM
    wow, Abdul, this is SO nice. another great poetry entry from you. I am impressed!