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In My Life

There are places I remember Some I used to call my home Family house behind the curtain Tiny hotel room in Rome There are people that I met Walking down the path of life Meeting some I do regret Many still walk alongside There were moments in my life Many I admit were hard Gone with a blink of an eye Some I cherish in my heart All those moments and those places People that I know and knew They’d lose meaning, color, flavor If in my life there was no YOU. (Based on "In My Life" by The Beatles)

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:18:00 PM

    Miroslaw.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:41:00 PM

    Nice poem.... thanks for sharing and congrats on your win.....

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:40:00 PM

    Miroslaw congrats on your win, love this...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:06:00 PM

    Nicely done Miroslav. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:08:00 PM

    Great and thoughtful way to pen your poem to the melody--congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:37:00 PM

    This is such a sweet poem. You have truly captured the essence of the original song. The last verse is pure gold! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

    Sulkowski Avatar Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski Date: 3/15/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot. It was a very interesting idea for a contest. (How about something similar based on Elvis, Cohen, etc.?) E