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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:02:00 PM
    YASMIN, :-) CONGRATULATIONS in Anne's "Battling Addiction" contest.. I think very highly of Miss Anne, take care~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:00:00 AM
    I was so pleased to see your lovely name in my winners list :) this piece was amazing, I cannot thank you enough for participating in my contest. Congrats sweetie! Hugs!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:54:00 AM

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:35:00 PM
    And I am hoplessly addicted to your poetry as well...congratulations, dear friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Very beautiful win Yasmin

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:59:00 AM
    Yassie, we have been away from each other too long, so easy to lose track and I'm so glad to read this wonderful one you have penned. Just amazing how the repetition of lines creates such a beauty! You are amazing, love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:14:00 AM
    You've been studying under a great teacher. And yes, a great vocabulary is the key.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 1:14:00 AM
    Hi Yasmin this is not a bad adiction to have, and yes I agree it does help me through life, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:37:00 PM
    This is wonderful....good luck...

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:34:00 PM
    A wonderful write, Yasmin. I enjoyed the read very much~ Caryl

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 3:24:00 PM
    so true..I was thinking of this too ;) hoping you are well XXOO Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Your poetry is an inspiration as you are as a poet... luv n hugs!!!!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:20:00 AM
    "writing has become a blessing needed for my soul's salvation" To this marvelous verse allow me my dear,Yasmin, to add this: What a marvelous vocation, To seek refuge in the depths of Our soul, Where God has hidden Our redemption! Excellent!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:46:00 AM
    simple and strong. it is a great poem.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:10:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:35:00 AM
    - A poem to be proud of Yasmin !!!!!! - Love it. <3 Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Wow, this write is so much better than my poem of the same subject my friend! You have so masterfully portrayed the desire to write, the need to put words down onto paper, as if needed for ones salvation! What an awesome piece Yasmin, you have outdone yourself with this one! What a delightful poem, Great Work!! PS very nicely done Quatern, you did very well with it!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 4:37:00 AM
    I like the poem. Writing is somewhat of an addiction, especially when it's just coming natural and free flowing. I usually don't comment on spelling or punctuation errors and am not even sure if it's an error, but I see the last quatrain says "sans" restriction. I really am not critical, but if I said lines 3,8,12 and 15 are 9 syllables, it will seem I'm too critical. I really don't mean to be. I actually wasn't familiar with this form, and am glad to see it. I do like the poem, great work.