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The Wind



From my lips
Songs of love
In the wind

Wind catches
Garden gate
A rhythm

Slow dancing
With the wind
Daffodils



For the "Ellip" contest..

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:55:00 PM

    deeply spirited!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:19:00 PM

    belated congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Listening to the wind now..as March howls it's voice !! Love the rhythm of the objects in the poem... Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:34:00 AM

    I can hear your lovely voice BG..sweet and melodious and so soothing...congrads for this wonderful write and a great win.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win with this amazing write! Lori

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 2:03:00 AM

    Congrats on your HM Barbara , I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:04:00 PM

    Congratulations on a fine win, Barbara. Annalise

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Barbara, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:14:00 AM

    Sweet! Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:59:00 PM

    Warmest congrats on this super win BG.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:38:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:32:00 AM

    This is a fabulously wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a supreme piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!