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Bewitched

Along a moonlight path, where lovers kiss Beware the spell that charms a fool For the midnight hour can blind the eye A capricious dark will twinkle eyes A trick to tempt crossed lover's kiss Bewitching every star-struck fool If you choose to be the fool Beguiled by moon, who winks an eye Be wary of the moonlight kiss A kiss will fool a blind man's eye, when stars conspire with the moon
________________________________________________ Inspired by Andrea's Contest: Tritina

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on an awesome win, Carrie! Enjoy your weekend! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:07:00 AM

    I like it! I've not yet tried tritina, but you've inspired me. Cheers!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:17:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:30:00 PM

    CARRIE, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:34:00 PM

    What a great twist on the contest---and good advice to top it off!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:10:00 PM

    nice one Carrie...good to share the spot with you, congrads on your win.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:58:00 AM

    So,,You've finally figured out the moon and stars are in cahoots, eh! That 'fella of yours has been plotting with them for years now! Continued LUCK with LIFE! RAY

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 10:49:00 AM

    an awesome write my friend Carrie, I like it. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!! :)

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Carrie xx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:26:00 AM

    Carrie congrats on your win, don't trust the moon eh..I like ...David

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:39:00 AM

    Carrie beautifully written. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:36:00 AM

    CongratulatIons Carrie on your win!I loved it On my first read.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:55:00 PM

    This was wonderful. I almost put it higher!!! Maybe I should have. Except I was trying to do three placements per number. Congrats on your win, Carrie!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:03:00 AM

    Wonderful!!Love your Tritina.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:51:00 PM

    Classic, that's what this is, Carrie! I'm so loving this! A definite one for the Winners' List! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 2:21:00 PM

    Nice Tritina, beautifully written :) Very mysterious

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 2:07:00 PM

    - Carrie, a unique poem that is perfect for contest ..... a little gem .... it will be a winning poem - Have a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)