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Sestina

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Sestina

The lost little Angel was fell into the urban slums
Walking aimlessly with nothing but her broken wings
Blossom into granules of dusts, intangible as a vagabond

Her heaven plucked as the moonlight stolen, the intangible vagabond
Her sanctity made her glowed illuminate those souls who ingested by the slums
However flagellation in disguise filled the story of her wonderful flawed wings

Trace stitches by stitches of her wings
Her world plays deception in those eyes who marked her as a vagabond
In fact she just an imperfect little Angel and they are the slums

Rose from the slums, the wings tore the shield of a vagabond

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Dropping by to say hello. I hope you had a wonderful day Yanny.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:40:00 PM
    HI YANNY, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:47:00 AM
    yanny congrats on your win....David

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/10/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:28:00 AM
    Yanny, your story in this poem is beautiful. I marked it down for the lines being overly long. Otherwise, it was wonderful. Congrats for the HM.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/10/2013 8:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I just changed the ending, hopefully this is already correct, thank you for the input Andrea :D hug, yanny
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/10/2013 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea, next time I will try to do better, thank you for your input, enjoyed to join in your challenging contest :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 10:28:00 PM
    Good morning Yanny

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/3/2013 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning Rick :D thank you for stopping by :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:41:00 PM
    You've got a way with words! This piece was very captivating, and so interesting. I'm sure many of us can come up with different interpretations. Always, Laura

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/3/2013 10:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Laura :D your words really uplifting :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Hi Yanny, all done with my poem

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:32:00 AM
    Some are fallen angels this I do believe.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/27/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you John, your words really uplifting :D glad to have a visit by you, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Yanny, very well written poem. The words were arranged so beautifully.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/27/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Abigale, pleasure to have a visit by you :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Angels walk amongst us! You never know when you are entertaining an angel. Lovely poem Yanny

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/23/2013 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Yanny, I hope you had a lovely day.
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/22/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, what a lovely eye, deep like an ocean bluish like a sky :) wishing you a wonderful day Rick :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:01:00 AM
    The finest poem I've read here in a long Yanny, it is GORGEOUS! - Thank you dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/22/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, this is my first attempt of this format, glad that you like it :D, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:03:00 AM
    wow, wow, wow Yanny..you just made my day...i loove it:-)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/22/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Word Craft,your comment also made my day :) wishing you a great day :D - hug,yanny