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Spring

Bobbing boats
spring blows own trumpet:
wave maker

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Seren nice haiku...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Beautifully written. Oh how I can't wait until winter is over.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/23/2013 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me too Connie....Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:44:00 AM

    Hi Seren yes spring soon my caravan in rhyl will be open and again i shall see the wavess, all the best Owen

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 2/23/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    is it the Robin Hood camp Owen?
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 2:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Which camp in Rhyl is your caravan know the area well.
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:06:00 AM

    that is so cool to say wave maker. This is how to make a cute twist in a haiku, Seren. And it can have a double meaning as well!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/22/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow did i do it right Andrea
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:24:00 PM

    I think this intriguing write is fantastic my friend! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, quite the masterful poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 2/25/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Russell....Seren