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Fate

I've always asked myself is there a thing as fate
Is everyone not responsible for his or her destiny
If it were possible the future you could anticipate
If that were something that a person could foresee

Like the path that you choose to destroy or deviate
When your looking for home that place of sanctuary
And it ends up being filled with emptiness and hate                                      
But guess everyone can have a sense of uncertainty

I was told things you earn nothings handed on a plate
And remember not every day will always be so sunny
Don't make rash decisions try and at first contemplate
And yet again yeah it's that same old age philosophy

Another avenue taken though one would still desolate
Because your feeling lost and now you are so unhappy
Ending up in such bad way, that you are in a right state
Still looking for absolution, but if it were that elementary




Kind of like a part two to fate 98 and a bad case of nostalgia
with this im trying to close a chapter but also question
which I always have is there such a thing as fate 
you know if i went down this road or this avenue
would things have been differeb[nt  perhaps if things were mapped-
out there would be no element of suprise
Perhap just me being brought up again with so many mixed messages
uncertanty of everything it were like the movies a meets b an along comes c
and every thing is hunky dory  but yeah its not rteality inspierd by other writes
and soup members written nov 2012,,,,,,,FATE,,,,,,,,,,,,,DESTINY,,,,,,,,,,,,CHANCE 

AGAIN READDED THIS IS THE FINAL TIME AS THINK THIS 
BETTER THAN BEFORE THOSE EXTRA TWO VERSES
WENT OFF ON ONE SEEMS MORE CLEARE ETTER PERSPECTIVE
I GUESS INSPIRED BY THE SOUP MEMBERS ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thankyou!


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