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Kiss The Rain

In the sound of those droplets of diamonds I remember all those memories as it rains upon me Those showers with a million feelings that encounter me I stand there all alone in the pouring rain As if the whole world is fast asleep No relations except the one with the rain I kiss the droplets as they fall on my lips Rain is just pouring water for some But for me it is a book of my own life As it pours down me, I can jump into my own life Those moments which were worth to remember Those moments in my mind As I stand there all alone, only in the presence of rain Just before the storm it came And washed away all my pain. 21.02.13

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 2:28:00 PM

    Congratulations Asma, on your well deserved first place win with this wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 3/3/2013 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Caryl :)
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 1:34:00 AM

    Excellent. Beautifully written. Congrats. Tfs

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 3/2/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ravi! :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:43:00 PM

    The poem was sure worth a win . Congrats. & sorry for the delay to reply.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 3/2/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Adarsh.. Its ok :)
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:14:00 PM

    Asma, congratulations in Gail's "Kiss The Rain" contest. always~ PD

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/28/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD :)
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:48:00 PM

    congratulations on ypur sweet victory..

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/28/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you mom :)
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:57:00 PM

    Lovely write, congratulations on your win. Jennifer

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/28/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jennifer :)
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:05:00 PM

    Congrats Asma on your big win, great poetry penned here, enjoyed xxx

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/28/2013 4:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rose :)
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:46:00 AM

    A Poetic masterpiece.... love it... xxx Michael

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/24/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael :)
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:15:00 PM

    Totally in the present, painful yet cleansing verse, Asma...so privileged to be reading your poetry this evening - Tim

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/24/2013 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Tim for appreciating my work today! :) tc
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 11:40:00 AM

    nice poem asma i like this one alot

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/24/2013 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading my poetry today Chris! :)
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:39:00 AM

    Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed it. Tfs

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/23/2013 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Ravi
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 3:15:00 AM

    Natural write up, i like the concept of droplet as diamond. Nature does it for us. Thanks for sharing.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/23/2013 4:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Chidozie :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:29:00 PM

    A dreamy, marvelous poem! I love the rain and this was splendid and inspiring! Always, Laura

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/22/2013 1:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Laura :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:18:00 PM

    I say bring on the rain! If only pain could be washed away so easily. Beautiful poem.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/22/2013 1:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes!:) Thank you Richard :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:11:00 AM

    You Inspire.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/21/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 5:01:00 AM

    I kiss the droplets as they fall on my lips Rain is just pouring water for some But for me it is a book of my own life, As it pours down me. Wonderful writing indeed, your poem is beautiful and tells a lot about your character.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/21/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot James! :)