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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:56:00 AM
    wow Kathryn,every line burned deep into my heart,your pain digs deep,let it out pain consumes you,it might be one every now and then but if you let it,it will become more,you need to talk to someone,face to face a shoulder you can cry on,sad write,don't say it's alright when it's not

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:54:00 PM
    Hi Kathryn this is a beautiful poem, full of imagery and symbols, literary components that help to take readers in several dimentions. It is a deep poem that resonates well. I hope that you were able to recover...writing is a very good medium to express your feelings. You are not alone one day you will understand the inner mean of this lost. Be strong!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 5:02:00 PM
    This is sad and very drammetic. Don't dispare. God has His reasons of why things happen. You now have 4 angels to look after you. please believe that. I too lost a baby that I never saw. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:24:00 PM
    nice keep up the good poetry