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Cold Autumn

    In the 
depths of winter 
   I find the icy 
touch of the sky 
   A cold season 
        where I might 
take delight 
   in the holy light forever 
   I won't give into any 
pressure 
   to change my thought system 
Perhaps I will continue 
   on
 the path 
    which I should 
have taken years ago 


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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:15:00 PM

    It's sort of melancholy, this poem. I sense a bit of regret and yet a bit a bit of hope. It's amazing how you can blend those two together so well. I'm not sure what to say about format... I wonder if you do it random and sporadically or have a goal in mind? In any case you are certainly a breath of fresh air to read!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:44:00 PM

    I really like this one, Matt. Gosh, long time no see!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 12:32:00 PM

    I get a strange feel of depression in this one..I hope not depression..Sara