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Pasionata

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Pasionata

My beloved Drino, Take me to the memory a neverlasting dream which lived in yester yesterday long before destiny took its toll and footprints marked separate paths Take me back to that December night where we ran holding hands to the cottage down the hill by fields of evergreen I am there, You are too Kissing snowflakes from my lips as melting moistness falls upon silk wisps of auburn hair How can I not remember your palms' gentle rub brushing raindrops which trickled ever so slow across the inner of my thigh Ahh !I can still smell the scent of your warm breath upon my neck's nape ~Honey and lemon I can still hear that hush hushed whisper beneath the tender of my ear Still live the feeling,of your fading kiss upon each flutter of my lash My beloved Drino Carry me back to those sheets which still know the voice and the colour of your eyes Let me travel to the cradle of those arms and perfumed wine Let me travel to that smile within the blossom of your heart Threaded petals on a cheek where scarlet velvets never sleep Let my slippery fingers slide to the soft hairs of your back as you unbutton my last piece of innocence As the corners of your mouth fulfill with juices from the ripeness of pink peaches As i open up to fire and you enter in flames My beloved Drino, take me to that night where i tickled your wilderness where you sank in my deep Take me to the moment where our sins were so sacred and lust carried no shame
Not for the contest.. But tnks Cyndi Macmillan for your 'Spice box' adult content contest had been an inspiration. Ps..I had to delete some spices after i posted it Hope its still liked : )

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  1. Date: 3/8/2014 6:47:00 PM
    absolutely beautiful

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:24:00 AM
    It's still liked very much. Beautiful writing; very passionate. Jack

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 6:18:00 AM
    I am beside myself. Very intense & direct. My thermometer in the living room SAYS it's 65. I think it's lying to me...by about 30 degrees more.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Very sexy and still very tasteful. You did an excellent job of capturing the thrill of a new relationship. Also the loss of innocence and the subsequent gain, pain and pleasure intertwined creating magic.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:27:00 AM
    Lust with no shame... the way it should be... wonderful, sensuous poem! Terry

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:25:00 AM
    Girl ! You didn't ! *smiles* Loved it! Have a wonderful journey dear poet ! How's the 'girlie' girlie ? Much love, james

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 6:05:00 AM
    That IS spicy! It would have been great for the contest. It's an excellent piece.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:34:00 AM
    Had to stop by and read this gem again...nice way to start the day - Tim

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:12:00 PM
    Thank for telling me about your dog and sorry for what happened. LIke my cat CAllie that died of cancer too. It's hard to go through the months of misery with your pets. My Ollyver has been gone over ten years now. That was an old poem I posted. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Wow, this poem is beautiful! Super sensual with fiery imagery! :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Charma, an excellent write, very sensual...David

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:11:00 AM
    just read your note to me, maybe others will see it and know how sexy this was!! Charma, please email me sometime. I don't think I added your changed address to my quick list. but if you email me, of course I will reply!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Maybe the absence of repitition makes this wonderful exchange worth remembering Charmaine - th eperfect length of memory in this beautiful composition - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:39:00 AM
    Have pity on an old man! I have this heart condition...Exciting, elegant, elating and erotic poem by the queen of erotica...Hmmm, wish I could see a few of those deleted spices (Never mind, couldn't take it) Excuse me a second, gotta go take a blood pressure pill...

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Stunning, picturesque and delightfully imaged filled/fueled :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:38:00 AM
    WICKED WRITE i DONT THINK ANYONE SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF LUST LOVE THE PASSION I WROTE ONE CALLED A SENSUAL ENJOYMENT WHICH TOOK OFF WANT TO REWRITE THANKS FOR COMENTS ON MINE XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:05:00 AM
    In between clicking on your Avataar and reaching in this page,your Avataar changed.Hahaha...an amazing poem!!!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 6:03:00 AM
    Ma Chere amie, What a marvelous poem! It starts with drops of words continuous with streams of phrases and ends with a cataract of sentences expressing your thunderous emotions! Fantastique! Merci ancore!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:22:00 PM
    dang, you deleted some of the spices?? And who is this drino? Wow, very nicely done, Charma. It's romantic AND passionate!!!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/27/2013 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was..How can i not remember your palms gentle touch rubbing raindrops which trickled ever so slow across the inner of my thigh.. and melting moistness falls upon my tongue..but i thought it was too much.. So i exchanged some wordings,.OOPS:0)
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Perfect entry for Cyndi's contest, Charma!! Soft, sensual, classy and filled with absolute passion! Well done! A definite winner! Love, Annalise

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