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Below is the poem entitled Space which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Space

Space is the nothingness between knowing and doing
Space is there between living and dying
Space hold the key between right and wrong
Space is the humm between thoughts and song
Space holds you back when you want to go forth
Space holds the excuses from the moment of birth
Without a space to move us forward to ensue
No sense would be made of what we do.


Dated 20/2/2013

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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:44:00 AM
    Hi poppet , chalk another up on your board luv and congrats on your win xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/5/2013 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy, this one was a near miss though haha....Seren
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Seren, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/4/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD i scraped in on that lol ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 10:29:00 AM
    A great approach on space. Good luck in the contest. Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/21/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie....Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 9:13:00 AM
    this is good Seren, it explains the space between my ears lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/21/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Mandy, as if .....Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:31:00 AM
    This is such an interesting write! "Space is the hum between thoughts and song" - I LOVE that!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/21/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Heather
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:56:00 PM
    I really like your approach to the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara, loved your work...Seren
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Space and opportunity is life. Nice Poem Seren!!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nate.......Seren
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Star now this I love and more importantly I love and need my own space at times...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    To be honest Dafydd I didnt think abour space til I read the contest.
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:30:00 AM
    Nice concept and well done..thnks for your comment on 'The Gull' keep in touch

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 5:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:40:00 AM
    This is a very awesome and delightful write my friend! I enjoyed reading this masterful poem this morning! You have enthralled me with this amazing piece Seren! Quite the beautiful write, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 5:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Russell
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:40:00 PM
    amazing thought !!! very well written poem..thank you dear sweet Seren for sharing <3 <3 <3 Sk

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for commenting, wonder how many will disagree with me...Seren
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:17:00 PM
    That's pretty good thinking. But what I get from this is that space can be measured. And we have the ability to limit that space. If not eliminate it. This is certainly one of those poems that make me think. Thanks for sharing. Rockman

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 11:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops typo am blaming my ipad... * could
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/19/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi i coud have gone on forever with my likenesses ( is there a word) lol but thought short and brief better. Thanks fr the comment...Seren