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Bob The Builder Lynn

	“Bob The Builder Lynn”  (2 years old)

At our residence in the United States
screw drivers and pliers are always at stake,
if in need, you will never find them even if you wail
as Lynn Waiyan Thein took them all away.
Around the house he would crawl and play
and he is “Bob the Builder”, he would call and say
as he is very much interested in fixing toy cars all day
playing with rings and spanners , the whole day. 
If you are in need, you should better buy a new one
as Lynn is the Commander in Chief with play gun 
Grand Pa, Grand Ma and all Aunts stayed fun.


By Dr Ko Ko Thein (U.S.A.)
Salt Lake City.
Dedicated to my 2 years old grandson Lynn W. Thein.

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:11:00 PM

    Thanks for your comments. Yes, we are neighbors, SLC and Pleasant Grove.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:44:00 PM

    what a sweet poem. Congrats to you. I see you are in SLC. I am in Pleasant Grove, near Provo!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Mya, a wonderful winning poem. Congratulations in Craig's lovely and fascinating contest. A good subject on "The Most Fascinating Person I Never Knew." goodnight* LINDA

    Thein Avatar Mya Thein Date: 3/7/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:12:00 PM

    well done .....Seren

    Thein Avatar Mya Thein Date: 3/7/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You very much Seren.
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:09:00 PM

    Mya, I couldn't leave you off the list, I can feel the love and pride you have for him and I pray he will get to know you for many years!

    Thein Avatar Mya Thein Date: 3/7/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate that Craig and it is really wonderful that you could feel my love and pride for him in my poem.