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Haiku 14

The dreaming highway,
a wide-open spacious life. 
Zero at the bone.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 PM

    quite an interesting one with the zero at the bone line!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/27/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lines just pop into my mind, and sometimes they seem to work with the haiku; not always.
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:35:00 PM

    Thanks for reading my "Spindled Mettle" and your comment. I like your haiku.... it's real !!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/19/2013 6:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again for reading it and commenting. J
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Very good, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 2/19/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading it, as always. It's good to hear from you. J