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I V

               I  V


                       He sat quietly in the incoporeal 
                     thought theater of confusion never listening to 
                   everpresent unsatisfied yet insatisible quivering 
                 thoughtfulls of glowing fantasies intrepid night 
               romances doing the don’ts of life and society
            I can taste you in my dreams   touch you in my
         nonsleep care for your waterfall uncommon 
       in luxury midnite delicious door chime 
     renedevous windcaste fate  meld of mind and 
   soul of flesh and time, one nonapart
 minute embracement  
                                 (and close my eyes)


dave collins

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  1. Date: 3/6/2014 8:07:00 PM

    Congratulations, Dave. GREAT win.

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 3:03:00 PM

    Dave congratulations on your well deserved win. I can see why you placed in this contest. Nicely written - Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 7:23:00 AM

    Thank you all for your kind thoughts

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 5:26:00 AM

    Great Win!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 12:43:00 PM

    Congrats on the win!!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 7:20:00 AM

    Dave, Congrats on placing at top in contest!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:55:00 AM

    - Dave, congratulations on your great winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:33:00 AM

    Creative write Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:12:00 AM

    Congrats on the worthy win Dave.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 5:05:00 AM

    Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, dave

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 9:55:00 PM

    Dave This is an intriguing write. Makes the reader think and feel. Nice job

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Interesting lines that you have penned..Sara