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I could run

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I could run

I could run 1700 miles
With just one breath
One intent
I could fly across the states
With my arms spread wide
Flying high
I could make it there
In just one hour
Or less
Fall into your arms
Smile in your kiss
Bask in your warmth
Your eyes light up
We could dance beneath Louisiana trees
As The stars burn like tea candles
I could run 1700 miles
Fly all the way to your heart
In my dreams

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:55:00 PM
    this is wonderful and visualy stunning. You have painted the picture with your lovely words.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:21:00 PM
    the best kind of love... great write :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Sometimes knowing what we're willing to do is proof enough of our devtions - its beautiful when devotion eliminates the dread of doubt - its fun to play in dreams - be careful with the landing though :b - 'Smile in your kiss...' is real sweet - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:24:00 AM
    How absolutely fantastic! Loved this write! He better be deserving of you! :)