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Moth
"Moth" The night shivers out Hymns upon lonely gray wings They drift like a sigh
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Sean Brown
Date: 4/30/2013 3:57:00 PM
This haiku has such an ethereal quality to it. A crystal clear image, and when I try to touch it, it flutters away. Stunning work.
Heather Ober
Date: 2/26/2013 8:03:00 AM
Wow, adding this one to my faves. The imagery is stunning!
S. K. A. T.
Date: 2/25/2013 7:26:00 PM
Jeremy, ooo!!! I'm not much of a moth person. However the imagery is something I see here every now and then. Makes me wonder why so frail. PS. I read and enjoyed the poem you posted named "EMILY." have a sweet one~SKAT
Kim Merryman
Date: 2/22/2013 9:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeremy! Love, Kim
Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/25/2013 8:39:00 PM
Thank ye kim!!!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2013 6:31:00 PM
wow, yours is amazing, Jeremy. what happened to you? i don't think I saw you lately. Congrats in this contest.
Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:06:00 PM
I've been around, here and there ;) I always appreciate your comments and visits Andrea
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/22/2013 1:32:00 AM
Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:06:00 PM
Hey Mandy, thanks for your lovely attention
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM
Jeremy ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:07:00 PM
Linda, thank you!!! I love writing haiku, my second favorite form of all time
ilene bauer
Date: 2/19/2013 3:21:00 PM
so tender and lovely!
Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2013 7:05:00 PM
Ilene, thank you.
Michael Dom
Date: 2/18/2013 11:36:00 PM
Hey Jeremy, I'm liking this one very. Check out 'my favourite haiku', I think we may have a theme going here. maybe even haikai no renga?