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Moth

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Moth

"Moth" 

The night shivers out
Hymns upon lonely gray wings 
They drift like a sigh 

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:57:00 PM
    This haiku has such an ethereal quality to it. A crystal clear image, and when I try to touch it, it flutters away. Stunning work.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Wow, adding this one to my faves. The imagery is stunning!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Jeremy, ooo!!! I'm not much of a moth person. However the imagery is something I see here every now and then. Makes me wonder why so frail. PS. I read and enjoyed the poem you posted named "EMILY." have a sweet one~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Jeremy! Love, Kim

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin
    Date: 2/25/2013 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank ye kim!!!
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:31:00 PM
    wow, yours is amazing, Jeremy. what happened to you? i don't think I saw you lately. Congrats in this contest.

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin
    Date: 2/22/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I've been around, here and there ;) I always appreciate your comments and visits Andrea
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Hi congratulations, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin
    Date: 2/22/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Mandy, thanks for your lovely attention
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Jeremy ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin
    Date: 2/22/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda, thank you!!! I love writing haiku, my second favorite form of all time
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:21:00 PM
    so tender and lovely!

    Martin Avatar Jeremy Martin
    Date: 2/22/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ilene, thank you.
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:36:00 PM
    Hey Jeremy, I'm liking this one very. Check out 'my favourite haiku', I think we may have a theme going here. maybe even haikai no renga?