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Battling Addiction

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Battling Addiction

Give me vodka, give me rum
I love the feeling of being numb
Give me a glass of Hennessy
I don’t care, just give it all to me
Everything is getting blurry
Why am I so filled with fury?
Alcohol all day and night
The only thing that feels all right
Can’t live without a single sip
I need the taste right on my lip
I killed myself with a dreadful thought
I’m the thing I cursed and fought
Mirror told me all the truth
I saw myself, I saw my youth
I’m filled with sorrow, I’m driven mad
I am just like my dreadful dad
Can I stop it? I don’t know
Addiction throws me back and fro
Alcohol is my fire of lust
Burning me as if it must
Killing my innards, destroying my mind
All because life wasn’t kind
Trapping myself, now I want to break free
Could somebody ever rescue me?
I need to escape; escape this obsession
The hardest thing is fighting addiction
Stuck on a battlefield, this is a war
I’m falling apart; revealing the scars
Alcohol, deadly love, dark passion
I’m crying, raging and battling addiction
 

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Julie, :-) CONGRATULATIONS in Anne's "Battling Addiction" contest.. I think very highly of Miss Anne, take care~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Hey love, a belated congrats on your special first place win in my contest! I loved the rhyme in this piece, very good poem, thank you so much for your entry!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Good write

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Julie xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:40:00 AM
    Wow, Julie! Excellent poem. Big congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:53:00 PM
    Kuddos on your win, Julie! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:18:00 PM
    Congratulations, RAY

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Congrats Julie...:-)