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With the eye as a target

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With the eye as a target

A hunting riffle
And a yell…
On the blue shade of silence
Scratches:
Flashes light in the horizon
The quietness…

Worms spin the fortune wheel;
Interfere with mermaids’ songs-
Pierced by the arrow
The sunset is blocked
Between the eyelashes.




(translated by Laura Bogdan )

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  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:52:00 AM
    Thank you very much for your comment. I am happy that my poems have resonance.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:11:00 PM
    I love how you shape words to tell a story, You have me on the edge of my seat reveling in the strength and courage of your convictions.