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in moonlight


light teasing,
Venus slips behind
naked branches




dew-drenched garden,
a cucumber glistens
in moonlight





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  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:39:00 AM

    salad of moonlit erotica dewy dressed teasing to the taste

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:04:00 PM

    Wonderful haiku here Chris!Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.Yes,one of my haiku has been published in the current issue of Frogpond(Winter,36.1).

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:19:00 PM

    Good old Chris, cool as a cucumber, It's moi the old Venetia girl dropping by in the land of Eden, "Adam baby, how do you like them apples?" Smile xxx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 1:35:00 PM

    These are burners...a smooth way to be naughty!

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/8/2013 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No double meaning in my comment. Those lines stuck to me...and you answered what i was thinking, it has a deeper meaning!
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:24:00 PM

    Two of the best haikus :) Thank you for your nice comment on my poem for Therese.

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:58:00 AM

    ahhhhhh......nice!! (love the cuke!!)

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Very very good Chris.... hope your well my friend... Michael

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:23:00 AM

    awesome Chris, and so easy to interchange both of these with each other...

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 9:09:00 PM

    the second one is REALLY awesome!!! I love both of them. what the heck were you trying to say to me on Lekker comment. haha

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:57:00 PM

    How do you do it? You have a special talent finding my worst poems! : ) That tanka s---s! : )

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 12:50:00 AM

    This is absolutely gorgeous.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:41:00 PM

    Waaaa hahhaa! Lately, Soupers are very sensitive... so far, during this week, I received 4 contra-comments. I thought you didnt like my joke. If you insist, I can re-type it! : )

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 2/18/2013 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I dont remember if you've read my Limerick...i dont remember its name... Encounter of the 4th kind or something like that...check it out.
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:10:00 AM

    I love this! *whisper* :D

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 2/18/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My Lief, dankie dat jy my haiku warm hou!