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Here comes the sun

Here comes the sun

In this cold place I know so well
Waves of warmth have finally come.
So I’ll wait with my tale to tell;
Over my world, here comes the sun!

Always after the rain it comes.
Why would I ever need to run?
When I can stand and bid welcome;
Into my arms, here comes the sun!

In the black of night before dawn,
When my dreaming has come undone,
Wanderlust, banished with a yawn;
Into my heart, here comes the sun!

In yesterdays shadows and shade,
Many things wrong I thought were fun.
Lying here in the love we made;
Open my eyes, here comes the sun!

Where did you come from my sweet elf?
How did you know I was the one?
You bring laughter into my life;
When you give love, here comes the sun!

For Heather Ober - Beatlemania

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Michael.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 3/21/2013 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD. :-)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Michael congrats on your win, excellent write...David

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 3/21/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David. :-)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Oh, that last stanza makes me smile!! Loved it!!! Congratulations

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 3/21/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carrie. :-)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:30:00 PM

    Well written and a deserving win. Rick

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 3/21/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rick. :-)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:52:00 PM

    This was such a sweet poem to read. You've nailed both rhythm and rhyme in this one. Congrats on your win in my contest :)

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 3/14/2013 3:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Heather, I'm basking in the glory. Thank you.
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:41:00 AM

    I like this awesome poem of yours friend Michael. Good luck in the contest and thanks for your kind visit on my poems, its highly appreciated, Hugs, Maria :)

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom Date: 3/2/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hola Maria. Thanks for stopping by:-)
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Hi Michael must admit I do like this one and a lot xx,,

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:40:00 PM

    Nice poem Michael.... Goodluck in the contest....

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Michael, i love the tale you are loving to tell in your poem.. here comes the good old sun... I wish you well in this contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 7:30:00 PM

    Bright sunny disposition in your poetry Michael, enjoyed xxx