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GREEN AND JADED EXTREMES

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Below is the poem entitled GREEN AND JADED EXTREMES which was written by poet Kim van Breda. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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GREEN AND JADED EXTREMES

‘GREEN AND JADED EXTREMES’

Sea green waves- the perfect backdrop to escape routine
 Lime infused cocktails and a favourite magazine
Avocado cuisine supplies healthier options to keep bodies lean
The emerald ring wraps another chapter of lovers unseen

Weary and jaded a dwindling sunset has faded
Vanishing unaided so clichéd and stale as memories cascaded
Fatigued shattered dreams of affluence- obscene limousines
Green waves start to wane- feigned with emotional pain
Desperate dreams now reflect in moon beams
Acute revolutionary thoughts commence -- desires to scream
Supreme drastic measures a dire requirement to redeem
The green emerald dream twists jaded-- a faded gleam

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  1. Date: 3/7/2014 10:35:00 AM
    Hi Kim, another coloured delight comes from your pen. Each vision flows so gently into the next as your green pen paints the words upon the canvas. Another beautiful coloured write from your pen Kim. Isn't it strange how ones dreams and desires, although they start out perfect can so easily fall by the wayside. I enjoyed the write Kim. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 3/7/2014 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Micheal. Gee wizz... you are really digging up the old ones here. My color spectrum of poems was written at a difficult time in my life... some of them really lack structure and flow, so thanks for your encouraging comments. They. . were however written from the heart.
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Hey--my favorite color. Gotta love it!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:02:00 PM
    I'm green with envy at such a beautiful write.