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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 10:59:00 PM

    So sweet, endearing... and full of life! I like your sensitivity towards a wilting little flower. It speaks of unconditional love and going out of your way just to make things a little brighter than when you found it. Wonderful!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:46:00 PM

    A very special write I liked it very much.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 11:28:00 PM

    EVERY thing you write and say...uplifts my Spirit...and renews my lust for life.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Becca this is a fabulous allegory. I love it. Well done. Love deb

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:46:00 PM

    This cheered me up this morning. Very sweet poem. ;) Hugs, Ali

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 9:59:00 PM

    this is such a sweet poem. Is it for the spring contest? Isn't there a Prince song about a Raspberry Beret or something? It's a really nice color for this happy "flower!"

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 9:58:00 PM

    Becca, this poem watered my hopes in finding good poetry.this was the perfect allegory and it couldn't have been told better.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 5:19:00 PM

    This is very sweet Becca, it put a smile on my face.

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 7:29:00 AM

    Perception of all things are possible with loving care. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Great story.... Hope raising. Cheers.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:49:00 PM

    Wow, this poem about sums it up for a successful relationship my friend! This is exactly how I see my wife and my relationship, we hit highs and lows together and survived! Trust me, I've seen her lowest low, and I still loved her all the same! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:21:00 PM

    What a delightful poem, my dear sweet Becca! Love Donna's comment...very true! Hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:05:00 PM

    To know someone really loves you you must know they love you at you worst, you captured that here beautifully...

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Soup Mail.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 8:08:00 AM

    Oh Becca,, this is so special, and all in what you say, now produces the most wondrous poetry, to embroider all of our lives, especially mine.....

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:01:00 AM

    What a cute poem with such a sweet thought, lovely, Becca:) Jag

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:58:00 AM

    - Becca, this is really a very special and beautiful poem. - Thank you! - - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:00:00 AM

    What an absolutely enchanting write. Very beautifully written. It carried me alone to the very last line. Goes into my favorites to share with my students when I teach the lesson on figurative speech and metaphors.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 11:19:00 PM

    What a lovely story.I love your use of metaphor.A person can do wonders to anorher person..so true dear.Just one spoon full of kindness and love.