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From Far Away

From Far Away I can see the blanket of stars tonight Even though they exist so far away in sight I can see them twinkling as if they dance In their stardust in perfect trance I can still hear echoes of an ocean’s waves Even though I’m standing from far away Perhaps it is a melody that keeps the sea in motion That penetrates the heart to feel deep emotion I still feel powerful looking at mountains that I can’t climb For looking at them from far away they don’t seem so high One day I picture myself succeeding in climbing to the top Until then it will remain a dream to keep me motivated and to never stop I am still touched by the raindrops coming down Even though their located from far away in a different town Their cold texture left a permanent memory for me to feel A window that showed reflections from their world that becomes real I can still imagine the moonlight and how beautiful it will be Even though it stands hidden from the sun from far away in the galaxy I can only wait that the sun will surrender to the moon to shine through Because from far away, anything is possible in its view

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:17:00 PM

    Fantastic poem enjoyed a lot. It's like a dream, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:09:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your beautiful and inspiring work this morn..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 4:38:00 PM

    you write so beautifully, Gail. EVERY time!! This is no exception. Wow!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 10:25:00 AM

    beautiful Poetry, wonderful imagery...

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:12:00 PM

    This is an amazing and incredible write! I just love how you wrote this delightful poem! What an outstanding piece, quite the magnificent poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:29:00 PM

    Lovely, Gail. I love the way you look at ordinary things and catch a deeper meaning. I particularly like the last two lines. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:43:00 PM

    Anything is possible one step at a time....beautiful Gail

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:46:00 PM

    This is beautiful Gail; I once climed a mountain with two of my cousins. It was in Idaho. I was only 15 and so was one of my cousins. It looked like it was real close.It wasn't, we had a lot iof fun, but our parents were worried. Something I will never forget. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 2:03:00 PM

    beautiful poem Gail....loved it....winning wishes....thanks for stopping by....love