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EARTHQUAKES

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EARTHQUAKES


                         An earthquake with enormous dimensions
                          Pain that destroy your joy and your smile
                         An internal earthquake that no one can see
                    Thoughts that destroy and that you are alone with
                            Pain that provides tears on your cheek
                      An internal earthquakes a cry that no one hears
                    The pleasure of life die in pain and heavy thoughts
                          An internal earthquake that no one can see
                             A rose that withers and eventually dies








16.02.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 6/23/2013 1:33:00 PM
    such a deep piece, especially the way yp speak of inner turmoil... sensational anne.. have a good sunday!..:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 7/7/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Nette, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 4:12:00 PM
    Yes, internal disasters are often worse or just as bad... Good write! Kim

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 5/14/2013 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:52:00 AM
    It seems that those internal disasters can be worse, for most don't know it's even happening... whereas tornadoes and such are obvious. Good work!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/21/2013 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Nice expressions penned in this poem. What a powerful term to describe inner turmoil. Missed reading your poetry while I was away....Hope all is well, Anne Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/2/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I send you much sunshine from Turkey, when the sun shines everything is fine, Gwen! - Thanks for your visit and comments - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 3/2/2013 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ps...i liked the contrasting ending of the fragile flower...
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:19:00 PM
    Very sad and touching. Beautifully written.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/25/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Carol. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Internal unseen damage is nicely worded caused by internal earthquake done by other from different dimensions in life. Your last line is absolutely true. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/23/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Anne Lise this has a very curious deep message here, hope it is not from life...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/22/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Life goes up and down, David :) Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Oh I have felt this kind of earthquake...But we must still carry on.Nice write! And have a pleasant and happy day. :o) f.e.f. oxoxo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/22/2013 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dan. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 6:34:00 AM
    A very beautifully sad poem my very dear friend! After an earthquake, there must always be hope for a new beginning. I've enjoyed reading again another outstanding and awesome write of yours tonight my dear Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for everything! love and big hugs, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/20/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love & big hug refunded to you my dear friend Leonora. - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you. <3 <3 <3 - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Let's hope and pray the rose only withers, awaiting a tender tending hand to gentle the earthquakes in our hearts and mind.... a survivor dreams this so for all to see...so it's said..pray that it be. Moved once again deeply by your words on this page... Good write, my friend, good write.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Earthquakes sometimes are necessary to test our endurance and to regenerate our psychological makeup! Very good conception wrapped in a foil of wisdom!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 1:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Demetrios. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 12:27:00 PM
    This is so sad Anne Lise,,,, it's good write, but sad. You are too nice to be sad,,,, thank you for reading I call her name. my X had dreams of his grave, was with him for 17yrs.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:50:00 AM
    Very weighty stuff! Internal earthquakes are indeed difficult to bear. Nice work. J

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 10:53:00 AM
    Beautifully sad, creatively written from one of my favorite poet here on PS :) Thanks for sharing my dear friend Anne Lise..been away for few days because I'm very busy with my final examination...thanks for your unending support and belated happy Valentine's day. hugs and kisses from me.. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Hope your examination went well !!!!! :)
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:28:00 AM
    well captured... it's once experienced. Luv your good concept.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Fisayo. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:22:00 PM
    Excellent write! I too must say this is the best poem I have read today and this whole week. I am impressed! Keep up the splendid work and thank you for your kind attention on my work~I appreciate it immensely. always, Laura

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2013 2:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Laura. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Anne Lise, this is the best piece I have read today. Love it :) xo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/18/2013 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Anne. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Very nice. I really like the concept of an internal earthquake. J

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/18/2013 12:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:21:00 PM
    Very passionate write, deep and heart felt enjoyed your poetry tonight Anne Lise Hope you had a good weekend, love xxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/18/2013 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, M.R. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/17/2013 6:00:00 PM
    I have had some moments and a moment of something is better then a life time of nothing, so believe me “ Life is short, ” and I do my best to “ make something out of it ” . OXOXOXOXXXXX ( B. J. “A” 2 ) Bill .V4D8

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/18/2013 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OXOXOXOXOXOX....................
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