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Gone

The tip of his hat, sly

The wink of his eye;
his look’s at I

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 10:55:00 PM

    hey, just seeing your avatar here. What a long beard you have!!!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Oh, very interesting. Creates a vivid picture. Write on! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:12:00 PM

    sorry, I can't see more. I should be driving home in my car by now and still have three comments to make hahaha

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:11:00 PM

    gosh, it must have been a while since I commented to you because this was a while back and I had not seen it yet. Thanks for reading my poem the other day. I enjoyed yours here as well !!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Is it sligh or slight? No matter - this one presents a world of speculation. Love it. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:30:00 PM

    mmm a nice write, and thans for your kind comments on my poems and nice to hear from you

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 8:41:00 PM

    James, a deep stare... now gone..enjoyed...pd