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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Delightful! I love the way you express the sounds of spring (the birds) as well. :-) Congratulation on your win, Yas. Love, Su

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:14:00 AM
    Very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:40:00 PM
    I feel the smile just reading this lovely poem........and the haiku describes how the corners of my mouth look right now! Nicely done...congratulations!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Nicely done. A well deserved win Yasmin. Congrats. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:54:00 AM
    I love how this built up and up to the smile and the sigh.... ahhhhh !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:14:00 AM
    I really like this one Yasmin--great win!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:41:00 AM
    Awesome Yas! Your haiku are so very beautiful and great use of Onomatopoeia in your prose. Well done dear and big congrats!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Yasmin, ;-) Congratulations with your nice winning poem in Debbie's "Spring haibun" contest... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:01:00 PM
    Awww it is YOU so cool hon, a very good verse indeed, I miss our chats! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Pleasure from the industry of creatures' delight - a great display of natural knowledge Yasmin - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:42:00 PM
    EVEn the haiku were amazingly beautiful, I forgot to mention!! It is not easy to write three great haiku all in the same haibun!!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:41:00 PM
    WOWOWOW. this is one of the best I have read, Yasmin. Yowzers. You should write prose more often. You excel in this type of descriptive writing. It is just what Debs had in mind, well, I hope so. I surely would score this high if it were MY contest!! BTW, what did you think of Inglorious bastards? I loved that show.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Very nice Haibun by you Yasmin.Lovely read.I am yet to try a Haibun.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 10:35:00 PM
    Spring shattering ice as it does concrete.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:34:00 PM
    I like the interweaving of prose and haiku. Cheers!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Deborah will love it! Best of luck in the contest, Yasmin! Happy Valentine Day!!! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 12:09:00 PM
    This is too beautiful to even consider calling magnificent, it's way beyond that it's spectacular my friend! I loved reading this delightfully amazing poem this afternoon! What a marvelous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:48:00 AM
    yas, absolutely love this, the prose, the haiku and the picture, well done my friend...david

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:13:00 AM
    I wish that spring was on its way here too Yasmin. - Beautiful poem, love it. - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)